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We just launched our company's website and we are looking for overall feedback on the clarity of our brand's message, visitor experience, and invitation into our suite of products and services. We are curious to hear your reaction and perspective. What do you love, what do you hate, what confuses you, what excites you?

www.universalimagination.org

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Hello! I sort of agree with @rene. I'm not sure what the value proposition is and I think the text could be a bit smaller, it's kind of difficult to read when it's so large. As someone who did a quick 5-minute tour of the site, I think it would be helpful if you could clarify on the homepage or at the very least on the services/solutions page what it is you are offering, maybe say something like "Book a course now!". Also, I'm not sure what iSelf is. With that said, I do like the design a lot, and I like the animations on the home page. I think with a little more thought, it could be a nice site.

Thanks for the feedback, we're going to adjust the text size. Let me know if you're curious to learn more because the iSELF page does have book a demo + testimonials now. As well as a carousel of offerings on the homepage. How can we make that clearer?

Nicely said Brandon!

Hi, I checked the website and I think it is good. I felt some passion you have from the website.

Are you mainly targeting consumers or businesses? If it is for consumers, I think the website should be responsive, and think it will be better if there's customer feedback or case studies on the product pages if you have one.

We are a R&D org so not targeting anyone specifically yet. It should be responsive on desktop/mobile, can you share where it wasn't? We do have offerings for both consumers and businesses and there already are customer feedback on the product page. Thanks for the feedback.

Fluff. Don't see what it is about. Has no real message. On my screen WAYS TOOO LARGE Characters.

Thank you for the feedback.
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Posted on Nov 14, 2022

Jeremy Lasman

@jlasman
A Creative Force for Imagination, Passion, and Conscious Evolution

Jeremy is a former SpaceX technologist turned consciousness trailblazer. As the founder of The Passion Company and pioneering quantum computing firm Quantum Star Systems, Jeremy Lasman fuses technical innovation with personal transformation. His work integrates science and spirituality, technology and creativity, intellect and artistry.


After a profound personal awakening, Jeremy spent over 5 years deeply researching and developing Imagination Technology - a new human operating system designed for conscious evolution. This extensive inquiry led him to create iSELF, the culmination of his life's work aimed at delivering this OS upgrade to humanity.


Jeremy guides people on journeys of self-discovery, pushes them beyond self-imposed limits through visionary thinking, creativity, playfulness and fearless expression. By challenging restrictive mindsets, he helps clients embrace their inner potential and tap into superhuman capabilities.


With an insatiable curiosity, philosopher's mind and creative spirit, Jeremy models innovation, purpose and conscious living. His goal is to empower people to live imaginative, meaningful and passionate lives aligned with their soul's purpose.

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